MonsieurZim's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Colodraws Fanart]

She’s not bad, but I think her legs are a bit Thick and her hands are a bit Tiny. I mean, she looks decent but otherwise I don’t see much errors. I also have a Cat gal OC Character. But, it’s not the worst I’ve seem but I call it 70/100

[Rainbow Dash]

It's not too bad. I believe you made her legs a bit too long, I mean RD is my Favorite out of the Mane 6. Her hips is a bit larger than how I would draw her. I understand your Aiming for that Anime style. I too, am a Brony and an Anime Artist. Well, Besides that It's not that bad. Also, the Bushes are a bit too stale. Otherwise, It's not that bad! These are the only I will give you!

bocodamondo responds:

heh, im quite curious how you stumbled upon this rather old piece now,
i appreciate the criticism, though i guess you wouldnt be surprised if i said this is quite outdated to reflect my current skills,

my interest in anything MLP related is long dead by now, so i wouldnt really find myself re-drawing this anytime soon to see how it'll look now

[Cammy Jack]

This is interesting... took me 6 months to find a decent Crossover picture. I love Street Fighter and MLP. I'm not a huge fan of Applejack but I'm impressed really. This is really interesting, Usually I don't comment on MLP Anthros, Seriously I stink compared to most people when it comes to Anthros in General! Well, I'm very impressed really! The best of two worlds I guess. Speaking of which, I'm surprised that it's an old pic!

[S9E7 - Yona is Pony Now]

Wow...... That's Impressive! You know what? I might bring this printed copy to EverFree Northwest, If It's okay with you! I think you did a great job doing this Artwork.... Seriously, I haven't caught up much with MLP but I gotta say you did a great job! I'm saying this because this is of the few SFW MLP FanArts out there. If you would like me to critique you well, you can do something with the stars in the sky! Otherwise you did a great job presenting both characters! 8/10!

[Lyra <3]

Wow....... I usually don't like Pony Anthros... but you're way better than what I can do in Pony Anthros. I like Lyra as a BG pony next to Derpy Hooves. I gotta hand it to you, You got some skills. Although, If you want to make her a bit more human-like you can change her feet into human feet. Although, it's up to you though. Some Artist do this in Pony Anthros and some do not. Otherwise, I don't see any mistakes... maybe a lack of color details but otherwise It's good, Excellent job!

Changotan responds:

Thank you <3 I'm doing my best to get better,, uhm I prefer to leave the feets for humans for the moment, but I could try it someday xd

[L'oiseau du bonheur]

Everything looks okay so far, But it seems that the perspective look a little bit off. Otherwise, I can't say it's good or is bad. It's sort of Meh quality, One of the few things I like about the art would probably be the buildings but really it's not my cup of tea I guess. Oh and Bonjour, comment vas-tu aujourd'hui? I hope you know what that means at least....

mogy64 responds:

might sound like a cop out, but the off perspective is intentional lol, i like when things are imperfect, and no no clue what that means lol
maybe someday ill make something that appeals to you!

[Sparkly Luna]

Not bad although, Luna's wings isn't Transparent and needs to be a bit bigger. Also, it's better if you add more details on her tail and mane. Your also missing the black crown on her head. Otherwise, Not bad really!

CutePencilCase responds:

There's a lot of art that follows Luna's show design perfectly, I would rather try something new, there's plenty of other art that has physical wings and horn and the crown and bibe thing she has, including some of my own, although I tend to never include the crown

[oc#1]

You did a good Highlight on her hair however, Her shoes are a bit small. I think your eye to ear ratio is a bit sloppy however I like the way you colored this Character and since it's Wreck it Ralph you earned the half star. I mean she is actually based on the Mass effect 2-3 Character as a Female Shepherd and It isn't the best RPG game because I prefer Elder Scrolls Online or the 6th one. Her upper bust seems like she's sort of Anorexic but otherwise you did a pretty Splendid job and I think you have some Potential within you!

KingSid1412 responds:

ha ha thanx for the review zimdragonlord.....glad u liked it....I am trying to get better u c...keep reviewing ok...thanx again :)

[Alula]

not bad, Although her lips seem a bit big Otherwise you did Great! Nice and Decent Concept I suppose ^_^!

[This way!]

That is magnificent even for a detailed and must Luscious art of technological Character... I like your concept of drawing it has a meaning!!