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[Cloudy's Life - Ep 2: Cloudy's Appointment]

Well, I mean you tried. I am a Brony and I just don't really get the joke of this, sure your trying to animate to be similar to Faust's style but, it's lacking something. I mean I can do something decent but, All I can give you as far as in Criticism goes is that, try to animate your OC's walking. The Lip syncing is a bit difficult but at least make it seem like they are talking to each other. Also, make your jokes a bit more humorous. I've seen this Donating Sperm Joke done plenty of times, add some more humor into it. That's all I can say. It doesn't have to be 20 minute long, but at least add some effort to it. I'm not to impressed then again, at least you have some potential.

TTCCD responds:

Understood. I was following the same animation style as other YouTubers by just moving their OCs. I did improve it by adding color to it but yeah. It is a bit bland.

[LL - Lock Legion Shorts]

LOL, OMG your Hilarious........ Yeah, well Thanks for including me as an Emo because Thanks to you group of low-lives I am no longer in LL anymore. In fact, some of you guys were Certified hacks because Ytmnd got hacked because they were flaming LL as being gay towards Wade. But I like the Flash about because it has some Compilation and yet someone even called me a N00b just made me feel like a Pro because I got out of your Group of well Unwanted, Evil people who based Wade in a Tank with a Racial Slur as your "N" Besides, I'm gonna include you in my next LL flash. If you want to flame me in my PM go ahead, I blocked you and other Locks so I lol. It would be a Final Flash and it wouldn't be released in NG. It would be released in YouTube, It's basically a Abandonment Flash but If someone told you everything that is Not Flash, or Software related you will feel stuck for 8 minutes and mention about Bacon! Why would I care if you eat bacon? Geez, sure you can even make a whole anti-KNL League and crap but does it look like I care? Nope, Pissing me off is extremely hard just like Me pissing you off! Besides, I quit LL because what one guy told me the dark Secret about it. Thank PumpkinLock or MarkerLock. He told me a dark secret and it's gonna be used as reference for my Final Lock Legion Flash! So, Goodnight and fun Flash oh boy............ From me being extinct from making flash for over 3 years lol!

MasterLock responds:

dude that was like 10 years ago

[Brian Small]

Wow, Very Expressive and yet an emotional outcome although, The Crazy part was the illuminati effect otherwise I like this animation, It did talk a lot about Enprisonment and what people will end up in Prison even for a Lifetime...

It makes anyone including me thinks twice about heading to Prison. Yeah, It's not a Good Place, I knew some BAD guys that ended up there! I don't want to end up like that guy, Seriously a Lesson well Learned about Life :) Thanks ~ZimDragonlord

MisterHerbal responds:

Thanks man, i'm glad it hit you on a certain level.

[Crazy Clown Dream]

Look, That was seriously a waste of time, That guy exploded and the End? If I were you I'd make something less Explicit and start making something more productive.. esspecially some parts of the Flash that was not Appropriate or Funny. This Flash was indeed a Waste of Time and I don't think this could be an Appropriate flash.. It wasn't Humorous at all. Not all Clowns are like that.... Most of which those are mimes.. I just don't get the point of watching this.. It seems very Grotesque and kind of Boring in my opinion.... Seriously don't make an assumption of that being Appropriate! That is all I can say as a Critique!

CrazyIntense responds:

Why, thank you for your kind words.

["Yes and..."]

First of all, I don't get your Punchline, Second it's too short.... Third of all good Voice Acting but make sure characters mouth Moves..... Dude no offense but it's not humorous like haha funny it's like you've underestimating the Punchline of the Joke... This is just horrible of 10 seconds of stupidity I can make about 48 hours a flash that is funnier than that But I decided not to because I'm on a break however, This flash Sucks because I don't get the Joke... It's not Hilarious but a HUGE waste of 10 seconds! Seriously It has to be improved or else I won't view your Flashes anymore.. Just take more time animating your characters it's that Complex dude! Try your best and it shall pass.... That's the only advice I'll give you!

Megaman511again responds:

To be honest with you, I can agree. I didn't really think it would be that funny, and that was okay. It was only ten seconds cause it was an assignment for this thing I needed to turn in related to conversations, so it was more of a test than a real cartoon. I promise to make more real cartoons, with my actual decent microphone cause like I said before, I was limited of supplies due to me making this during school. (Yes, I have a computer class which I installed a portable Flash 8 and used that.)

[Xbox One StripKinect]

Yeah, Boy even you knew that the new kinect was scarier than the old Xbox 360's man that is what I call talent I felt the same why When I turned my PS Vita and she yelled "STOP THIS SHIT" and then I was shocked it was deh shinigami Voice of wierdness! I suppose you are a genius we shall collaborate on this project a bit more next year!

WooleyWorld responds:

Pff. Cool deal.

[A Girl In A Room Collab]

Now this deserves to be made, I like this because it taught me a lesson about Real/Horror Than then opposite, That's very sweet of you guys... I love the ides of this flash We shall Collaborate!

ReklessCreati0n responds:

Haha, thanks man, glad you enjoyed it.

[Epicbottle Halloween 2013]

That's not very good, It made me feel like crap Seriously Stop making me feel bad, That's not very kind esspecially to Society... Also, make sure that you will improve people not make them feel hurt... Geez, Think of something better to do? Okay, Deal?

InkClod responds:

wat

[Peach's Big Speech.]

Oh I see Interesting but Where's the Point

Yeah I heard Peach's speech but really its pretty long and very inspirational and yet, It makes me wonder! I need better inspiration as in other locks in all. Yet I do get the Point Sunshine but I can't give a 10/10 because its too long of a speech yes? I mean I'm making a good LL flash that might take a longer time to make! But really this speech is pretty inspiring and well Marvelous that is all I'm going to say for now! Oh and Ignore that Yogibeal Guy, I still have more flash than him check my account if you don't believe me!

uglyslug responds:

wjat

[LL-Lock Day In Claymania!]

Hold up!!!!!!

Look Here some advice to you that you may need to make a good lock movie First of all, Don't use claymation It is the lowest form of flash making [unless your dealing with a huge important day] second, There's a thing called Speakonia which lock members use to make movies with. Last, I have to say If your not an official lock, Do not Make Lock legion movies. P.S. I used to know alot of this becuase I used to be a member in the lock legion but, I was banned there. Don't make the mistake I did.

backspin1 responds:

lalalallalala......what did u say???